COMMERCIAL BRAKE!!


The scene opens and we see Hikaru Gosankugi (local wimp from 
Ranma ½) getting dressed as fast as possible, constantly checking the 
time on his wristwatch. 
As he enters the bathroom, he grabs his deodorant but alas 
finds out that it's empty. Next to it, he sees two other deodorants, 
each one belonging to his two roommates. 
Being in such a hurry, he doesn't think about it twice, 
grabs'em both and quickly sprays himself. He then drops them on the 
sink without even putting the cap back on.

On both deodorants we see "Fragance pour Hunks" written.

Hikaru rushes out of the apartment, slamming the door behind him and 
waking up his two roommates in the process.
We see they're none other than Ranma Saotome and Tenchi Masaki.

Scene cut. We're now inside a huge building.
Hikaru barely makes it to the elevator. Inside, there's only him and Rei 
Ayanami, who's looking as sullen as always.

Another scene cut. We're back at the apartment where Ranma and Tenchi 
are. Ranma steps into the bathroom and sees his deodorant, as well as 
Tenchi's, misplaced. 

Ranma: Yo, Tenchi, did you use my deodorant?

Tenchi: Don't look at me. I just got up. Must be Hikaru who borrowed it.

Ranma: Looks like he borrowed  yours too.

Tenchi: You mean he put on BOTH deodorants??

Ranma: Looks like it.

Tenchi: Oh boy...

Cut scene to the elevator where Hikaru and Rei are. 
Rei is looking somewhat strangely at Hikaru. She appears to be 
uncomfortable and keeps biting her lower lip.
Hikaru is looking rather nervous as well, unable to understand what's 
gotten into the girl.

Unable to contain herself, Rei presses the emergency stop button and 
halts the elevator. She then moves towards Hikaru with a hungry look 
in her eyes.

Cut scene. On a top floor, the elevator door opens and Rei steps 
outside, readjusting her dress and looking very satisfied.
Behind, Hikaru is found with his unbutton shirt. His hair is now a mess 
and we can see several lip marks all over his face. He also has one heck 
of a stupid smile.

Just as the elevator door is about to close entirely, a hand stretches 
out and makes it open again. Wee see it's Ryoko who is looking wickedly 
at the young boy.

Hikaru gulps.

Cut scene to a close up on the famous deodorant.

Narrator: "Fragance pour Hunks" the true secret behind all Anime studs. 

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All characters of "Ranma 1/2", "Tenchi Muyo", and "Neon Genesis 
Evangelion" belong to their respective owners.
The commercial idea, however, is mine.
C&C can be sent at: jnsoullard@hotmail.com
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